Trouble with pouring countless hours into a single piece of art, is that it's easy to become so absorbed by it, that imagining the eye of the audience or the viewer becomes hazy.
It's handy to pass things around and get feedback, as long as those you show are credible and trusted, and not some one who desperately enjoys the rare opportunity to jump on their high horse and pretend they know what they're talking about.
The footprint scene needs to be exactly that, a scene which reveals the monsters presence through the gaping massive footprint he has left behind. But does this look like a footprint? I feel it's not clear enough.
Some more sculpting work is in order.
I think I need an aerial shot to help show off the footprint, though it was not planned in the storyboards, and will require more work, but this is all apart of the process.
too dark.
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